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  A类小作文
  【作文类型】折线动态)
  【作文题目】: Darwin和Melbourne两个城市的平均月温度和每日日照时常对比
  【综合点评】动态折线图。该题应注意进行变化 本题涉及到不同月份之间的横向比较,也涉及到不同城市之间的纵向对比。考生需要在 150 字之内对图表里的信息进行概括,有侧重的描写主要特征,必要时选择适当省略。趋势的分类;纵比找出这条线的重点特殊点,如:起始点,高点,低点,以及变化趋势;横比需对不同曲线进行区别比较,找出:交点,排序等;该题考生应注意句式的复杂度以及将来时间和变化的表达方式。
  A类大作文
  【作文题目】The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development.
  To what extent do you agree or disagree?
  【题目分析】agree or disagree类题型。本题是2018年2月3日的原题重现,关于老建筑是否该保留或者拆除的问题。这种题属于雅思考题中的常规话题,可以结合城市发展的话题和传统文化保护的话题来写。
  【题材类别】建筑类
  【参考范文】
  The high speed urbanization has generated contrasting attitudes towards ancient buildings among governments in different countries. Numerous old buildings are being eradicated in order to give way to new housing and road development, which, from my own perspective, actually conceals the underlying flaws of this practice.

  It is undeniable that, under the expansion of the city, more new houses and roads are becoming urgently needed. Well designed modern buildings with reasonable spatial arrangement are more glamorous and functional than old ones, such as accommodating more people in the crowded metropolis. In addition, advanced thermal insulation building materials and central heating system result in consuming less resources, causing less environmental damages. Moreover, highly developed cities require advanced traffic system that can ease the traffic congestion plaguing most of the world’s major cities .
  展开全文While considering from a more comprehensive aspect, the value of restoring meritorious ancient buildings should never be neglected. Despite the cost of restoration, old building could serve as landmarks of the unique and local history, so their historical value could weigh much more than its function serving as mere residence. Additionally, preserving old buildings may benefit local tourism to some extent. When well-protected ancient buildings with historical significance are publicized, tourists attracted would surge to them, stimulating the economic increase such as purchasing and hotel industry. The revenue from tourism can be invested in not only safeguarding ancient buildings but also constructing newer houses and developing roads.
  Even though it is hard to arrive at an absolute conclusion, I strongly conceive that conservation of ancient buildings could be costly, but it is rewarding in the long terms. Ancient buildings with significant historical value should be restored however huge the expenditure is, and those of less value be torn down to give way to urban development.

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