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六级满分作文之收集的好处

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  六级级作文范文之Advantages of Collecting收集的好处
  Some small things are collected delibe rately in the home in an attempt to avoid waste. Amongthese I would list string and brown paper, kept by thrifty people when a parcel has beenopened, to save buying these two requisites. However, collecting as a serious hobby is quitedifferent and has many advantages. Firstly, it provides relaxation for leisure hours, just as looking at one's treasure is always apleasure. One does not have to go outside for amusement, since the collection is housed athome. Whatever it consists of, stamps, records, pictures, model cars, stuffed birds, toy animals, there is always something to do in connection with it, from finding the right place for the latestaddition to verifying facts in reference books. Consequently, one's knowledge expands.
  Secondly, this hobby educates one not only in the chosen subject, but also in general matterswhich have some bearing on it, for instance, to meet like-minded collectors, to get advice, tocompare notes, to show off the latest find, and so on. In this way, one's circle of friends grows.
  Thirdly, the hobby soon leads to travel, perhaps to a meeting in another town, possibly a tripabroad in search of rare specimen (for collectors are not confined to one country). Over theyears one may well become an authority on one's hobby and will very probably be asked togive informal talks to little gatherings and then, if successful, to larger audience. In so doingself-confidence grows, first from mastering a subject, then from being able to talk about it. In conclusion, collecting, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a personcontented, with no time for boredom.

  结构分析:
  ·收藏是一种爱好, 不同于存放日常用品
  ·收藏的好处
  * Relaxation and pleasure
  * Enlarge one's circle of friends
  * Travel and meet more people
  ·结论
  * Use time constructively
  * No boredom
  内容分析:
  本文是一篇议论文。头一段是引子, 说明人们常常存放一些日常使用的小东西以备不时之需, 但这不是收藏。收藏是一种爱好, 甚至是一种终生爱好。以下三段分列收藏的好处, 紧扣主题, 而每一段的后一句都写出了结果, 用了consequently ,in this way , in so doing 三个过渡词语。之后一段是一个简单的概括。学习本文应注意模仿使用不同的句式。
  作文句型:
  deliberately ad. 故意
  in an attempt to v. 为了, 企图
  string n. 线
  brown paper 牛皮纸
  thrifty people 节俭的人们
  requisite n. 必需品
  relaxa tion n. 休息, 放松
  amusement n. 娱乐
  be housed at home 藏在家中
  stuffed birds 填鸟
  toy animals 玩具动物
  in connection with... 与……有关
  the latest addition新的收藏品
  verifying facts in reference books 在参考书中查证事实
  have some bearing on it 与……有关
  like-minded collectors 想法相同的收藏者

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